Monday, April 27, 2009

ACID


The colours, red and yellow and green,
And the Dark in the light chrome,
The stretched curves in the sketch,
And the blurred sight of Another home.

It's not me,
It might be acid,

But I don't know.

The beeps preceding the singular note,
And the percussion beaten free,
And a bird sings in the background,
The sound is incoherent harmony.

It can't be me,
They say it's acid,

But I don't know.

This is the smell of withered roses,
Where does it come from, petals or thorns?
But it is indeed a pleasant fragrance,
And I feel like an infant, newly born.

It might be me,
It almost is acid,

But I don't know.

And now I feel the pinch,
So this is what they call pain,
I feel warm like the steel in the daylight,
And the drops that strike me, might be rain.

Oh! Yes.

It is me,
And it is acid.

But I will never know.

8 comments:

Photogenic Devil said...

THE POEM IS NICE
THOUGH THE CONCEPT OF ACID ESCAPES ME

SAMJHAO

Siddhant said...

"ACID" is an common word used for the LSD drug.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/LSD
It is a drug which can cause "intense spiritual experiences" ... and all kinds of psychedelic visions ....
Usi ke baare mein hai poem ... the senses of sight, sound, smell and touch ( I forgot taste perhaps ... ) ... for someone under the effect of 'acid' .... and how he does not know anything though he is experiencing so many things ...
this is the concept ...
baki meaning to .. it depends how someone reads it ...

Photogenic Devil said...

i know wat lsd drug is

infact their is a great buk on it - THE VALLEY OF THE DOLLS

DOLL = LSD

THNX FOR THE INFO
BTW IF U EVER GO TO LANDMARK , ASK THEM ABOUT THE BOOK I MENTIONED , AND TELL ME IF THEY HAVE IT ,

Photogenic Devil said...

NOW THAT I KNW WAT ACID IS
MUST SAY
REALLY WELL WRITTEN - GOOD TO SEE YOU PUTTING SUCH A GOOD CONCEPT IN YOUR POEMS

KEEP WRITING

Siddhant said...

thanks! ...
aaj akash se poochha tha .. keh raha tha bahut famous book hai .. to landmark pe hogi ...

Photogenic Devil said...

kuch naya likho jaldi

sanz said...

well written ......too profound i must say

sidspacewalker said...

thanks !