Don't look at me like that,
Your eyes say more that I understand,
They tell me more than I need to know,
These tearful waters reflect your heart,
Don't let these emotions grow.
Don't think of me like that,
I might be as fleeting as your thoughts,
Such immortal importance I do not deserve,
My misty presence floats through your mind,
Clear this mist! So sincerely you preserve ...
Your eyes say more that I understand,
They tell me more than I need to know,
These tearful waters reflect your heart,
Don't let these emotions grow.
Don't think of me like that,
I might be as fleeting as your thoughts,
Such immortal importance I do not deserve,
My misty presence floats through your mind,
Clear this mist! So sincerely you preserve ...
1 comment:
your eyes say more THAN i understand
u have a habit of using over dramtic frases in poetry
wen u stay natural then u are like gr8
stay that ways na ...
tearful waters???
ill be kind and ill say i hate it
then one more small correction
clear the mist that u so sincerly preserve
one of ur worst works
infact not at all ur usual standards
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