Wednesday, March 12, 2008

The Leaf


This leaf from the canopy above,
Falls to the ground , or rather tries to ,
When a gust of wind comes about,
Lifts it up, and away it flew.

Carried by this unknown force,
It twists and turns and rises and falls,
It rues the fact of being so vulnerable,
Rest it shouts , for freedom it calls .

Changing direction with every random wind,
It notices the dust that flies with it .
"No different I am from these helpless beings " , it thinks
"To this indifferent won't we all submit"

It realizes the pain of being controlled,
But forgets something that had always been,
The golden sun and the blue sky ,
Remind the leaf of its color , still green!

Sharp veins still ran through its body,
The sunlight still shines on its dewy layers.
Its unique identity still intact,
Whatever the wind does now , the leaf little cares.

Let the cosmos play its sport,
What you always were , is what you have become.
We hold our own strings ,
Our own Randomness defines our Freedom.

3 comments:

Photogenic Devil said...

OK ONE OF MY FAVOURITES
i wont comment much on it then

love the line
rest it shouts , for freedom it calls

make it
forced to change it direction with every random gust

then it sounds better and is more meaningful

to this INDIFFERENCE wont we all submit??

it UNDERSTANDS the pain of being controlled

make it
the little leaf doesnt care

change the title
change refrase the last line


this is acc to me mayb the best of the poems uv ever written

but yeah I HATE THE TITLE
IT SEEMS U WERE TOO LAZY TO THINK OF A PROPER LAST LINE OR BETTER TITLE
DONT DO THT!!!

Siddhant said...

ye achha hai ... one of your fav. .... so you won't comments much on it .....


title is not very catchy for sure .... but it has randomness , and it has freedom .... so it works ... although i didnt like the last line myself a lot ;... so i could think of changing it ...

sidspacewalker said...

ok .... leaf works better perhaps ....