Me dont understand friendship ,
Me dont understand my friends ,Me hurts anyone close to me ,
Thus our frienship ends.
Me thought I was a good friend ,
Me tried making people feel good,
Me but didnt realize ,
I never do the things I should!
Me sometimes was hurt ,
Me sometimes cried ,
Me but thinks it does not matter ,
Its only my faults I try to hide .
Me now thinks ,
Me nobody's friend could stand ,
Me but is confused ,
perhaps it is the meaning of friendship I dont understand......
4 comments:
MAKE ONE CHANGE
I NEDER DO THE THINGS I SHLD KI JAGAH
I NEVER DO THINGS RITE
THEN IT RHYMES ALSO
AND IS BETTER IN THE UNITY OF THE POEM
SELF DOUBTING
SELF HATING
INSECURE
YET AGAIN I SAY
I LIKE IT A LOT
SO ILL RANK MY PREFERENCES
1.] ME THINKS
2.] HELPLESS HOPE
3.] LONELY TODAY
4.] LEAF
ALL THE TITLES NEED CHANGING !!!!
PLZ DONT RUIN THE ARTICLE BY GIVING AN UNDER IMPRESSIVE AND ALSOLUTE ULTA MEANING WALA TITLE!!!!!!!!!
right instead of should will break the rhyme na ....
and i hope you noticed the "?" in the title ....
thts ur problem
u pay a lot of emphasis on"rhyme"
sad
u need to grow dude!!!
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